托福写作中网购类作文小评

　　这里，首先给出一些有关网购使用的例句：

　　1. e-shopping is fast and convenient.^网上购物快捷方便。

　　2. we can buy all kinds of things online.^我们可以在网上购买各种东西。

　　3. e-bay is a large shopping website.^e-bay是一个大型购物网站。

　　4. when e-shopping， pay particular attention to safekeeping your account information.^网上购物时，特别注意你账户信息的安全。

　　5. before e-shopping， be sure that you know all the details of the article.^网上购物前，确信你知道物品的所有细节。

　　6. you should check your goods carefully after receiving it.^收到货物之后，你要仔细检查你的物品。

　　7. shop on reliable websites.^在可信赖的网站交易(购物)。

　　8. shopping online is a bargain because you can always get a discount.^网上购物都是便宜货，因为你总可以得到打折的机会。

　　9. i am not particularly keen on e-shopping.^我不是非常热衷于网上购物。

　　10. e-shopping has the potential danger of being cheated.^网上购物有被骗的潜在危险。

　　11. one of the disadvantages of e-shopping is that you are not able to see the commodity until you receive it.^网上购物的缺点之一就是，在你收到商品之前你不可能看到它。

　　12. i prefer shopping in a traditional way to e-shopping.^较之网上购物，我更喜欢以传统方式购物。

　　范文：Today Life becoming more busy，people don't have enough time for shopping.So， they prefer online shopping that becoming more popular.But everything has two aspects like a coin has two sides， darker and brighter side. Same On line shopping has its drawbacks as well as its benefits.

　　People can purchase everything from staying at home.They will not have to go outside for buying things. So， there will be less traffic congestion and pollution will decrease that is good for saving our environment.For example，In my country(India) there is more pollution as a result quantity of oxygen is going down.So on line shopping is the best way to reduce pollution. This will also good for IT graduates because there will be more jobs in IT field but it will pay the bad effect on other qualified people.As a result unemployment may climb up. I give u a real example of my brother， He did his job in a company but he lost it 5 months ago due to less knowledge of computer. Even he got master degree but those person who appointed has only IT diploma.So on line shopping helps to rise unemployment.

　　As a conclusion， Its advantages are overweight its disadvantages. But government can reduce these disadvantages also， if he gives other jobs to unemployed people.