托福写作之五个基本结构的写法

　　1、开头

　　Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别);

　　On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景)，XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 , However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改写题目2.

　　Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).

　　要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

　　Sample two：(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time，就用下面的)

　　On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).

　　要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)

　　2、分点一：分层论证

　　Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

　　_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,

　　On one hand_________, On the other hand_________

　　Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

　　这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子!

　　3、分点二：举例论证

　　Further lending credence to my position is that____________

　　(简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面)

　　一句话总结例子：As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

　　4、让步段：

　　Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______

　　However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

　　二选一：Admittedly, BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However，BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales.

　　5、结尾段：

　　Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that 改写题目3

　　Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

　　and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

　　Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)