托福写作备考简化句式方法30例

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must graspsome technical skills.

　　改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn somepractical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lotof money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lotof money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all hislife.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will beunhappy all his life.

　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studieslater.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else’s opinion, I will study withothers.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time whenwe finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behindafter meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.