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　　Private highway or Public transportation。

　　I believe that our government should spend more money on transportation.Here is why。

　　First of all, public transportation such as buses and subways can deliver agreat amount of people at the same time. For instance, subways can alwaystransfer hundreds of people to their destinations as soon as possible. Longdistance buses will give a handful of help to many people who work in adifferent city as they live. In addition, local buses are heroes for making oureveryday life easier。

　　Secondly, public transportation can effectively relieve the trafficcongestion in rush hour. For example, living in a metropolitan like New York orToronto, people are highly recommended to take public transportation. Not onlythe gasoline price today is scaring people away, but they always agree that itcan take them forever to get out of a traffic jam in rush hour。

　　Last but not least, buses and subways today are typically powered by lowemission fuels and even electricity. The government should realize that thiswill make a great contribution to the city’s environment. In the other hand,environmental problem has been raised as a global concern. I think ourgovernment should not consider the future impact of car emissions at last;otherwise they will eventually spend more money from their budget to save theenvironment。

　　As a matter of fact, highway improvement is somehow required as well.Nowadays, in the city I am living, almost every family owns a car. My parentsare living outside the city, they drive to work everyday. In holidays, they willinvite me to have a trip. We can plan the trip wherever we want to go. Peoplehave more freedom to travel with cars, and it turns out that highways are alwaysoccupied during weekend。

　　To conclude, public transportation requires more attention from ourgovernment. For instance, such as the quality of buses, the appropriate increaseof routes and the safety concerns。