托福独立写作范文：人们更关心公众的认可胜过钱

　　What is more, money can be utilized to broaden social circle or improveoneself. As we know, no one can achieve success without others’ help, that is tosay, sometimes whether you will succeed depends on how many friends you have.Friends can give us plenty of useful suggestions and precious opportunities,which may help us a lot during the process of the pursuit of happiness.Therefore, sometimes money can be used to consort successful people or join insome meets among the upper class, in which you need to wear decent clothes.Additionally, in order to achieve success, we need to improve our knowledge andexperience. Therefore, taking some courses or training and buying helpful booksare essential to improve ourselves. In a word, during the process of achievingsuccess, money is indispensible if you want to go further.

　　Admittedly, social recognition would be taken into consideration if peoplealready have enough money. In Maslow's hierarchy of needs mentioned above,social recognition is a higher level requirement, when the basic necessities oflife has been satisfied with money, individual start to regard things likerecognition as their life pursuit. As the case stands, even there’s no moneypaid, they will be still willing to work hard to pursue respect, realize theirpersonal value or even change the world like Steve Jobs.

　　Based on the analysis from all the evidence provided above, I canreasonably reaffirm that money is the fundamental requirement when people workhard, while public recognition would be taken into account only when they haveenough money. (464)