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　　To begin with, those pictures could exert negative influences onadolescents. Adolescence is a transitional and immature stage of physical andpsychological development, a stage that could be readily and deeply affected byoutside world. For example; many Facebook users, especially adolescents,displays references to alcohol and substance use on their Facebook profiles. Onestudy of alcohol displays on underage college Facebook users found that 35percent participant profiles displayed alcohol. This trend continues to increasedramatically. One of critics claimed that sometimes, those teenagers posted suchpictures just to look cool, but in fact it led to imitation and even frenzyamong friends. In addition, a piece of striking news made on the front page isthat a girl from Taiwan posted her Porsche car, hundreds of luxury shoes, andeven a private jet plane on her homepage. Then, after a week, thousands ofphotos about luxury brands, private boats, and decent villas appear on theInstagram. Form these examples we see photos shape false values forteenagers.

　　In addition, exposed phones might bring unintended consequence. Bystatistic, most of network profiles are set ‘‘ visible to public’’ meaninganyone can access the profiles that users have updated. Once those pictures andphotos are targeted by harming users, these would put people at a higher risk ofbeing stalked and then raped or even killed. The RANN ( the rape , Abuse andIncest National Network ) has released a report that there are millions stalkingeach year in America. Of course, one in four reported experiencing cyberstalking. What’ worse, due to safety holes，some sex offenders always find a wayto access to picture of young children; stalk them by hints photos left and thencommitted crimes at last. Thus, it is parent’s responsibility that stopsuploading life pictures about children’s for their protection.

　　Assuming above, although keeping records might leave an unforgettablememory, posting photos with geographic information would not only definitelymake strangers aware of their location, and thus leads to uNPRedictable risksfor users, but also mold false values among teenagers.