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托福高分作文

2015-02-02来源:互联网

  托福高分作文中的独立写作,尽量不要套模板,考官看得不止是字句更看重的是字里行间透露出来的个人思想,这是灵魂级别的,都知道老外开口就是god。在一点注意的是写作不要急功近利,要稳扎稳打,积累才成河才成江才成湖才成海,平时多积累点句子吧。

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  Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and thenestablishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goalis involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model inthis respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the primealternative.

  Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contributegreatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not allexperience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personaleffort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. Asingle thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shiningcompared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one seesfurther when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explainswhy a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamworkin corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchangeof ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of eachindividula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even theentire global village.