托福写作结尾方法探究

　　托福考试写作结尾段有那些构成要素呢?

　　1. 再次陈述主题。用 paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。

　　2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。

　　托福写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法：

　　一. 托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议

　　In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success,it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors thatrequire routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations tobecome successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristicof creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish fromothers to succeed.

　　二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果

　　假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做，在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果，帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果，进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。

　　e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profitimmensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offeradditional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government shouldprovide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists whoengage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as nationaltreasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not supportthose unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of artswould disappear very soon.

　　三. 提出问题留待读者思考

　　In conclusion, it is inevitable for children to commit mistakes at a youngage, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviorsin their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as ameaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permittheir children to commit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?

　　结尾段常用表达方式：

　　Finally, thus, in a word, in brief;

　　In conclusion, to conclude, in the end;

　　In the final analysis, in a nutshell, on the whole;

　　To summarize, to encapsulate, in sum, in summary

　　In light of these facts, considering these ideas