托福综合写作不同的开头方法

　　开头方法一、比较新颖、有创意的开头

　　“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workerswill lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to suchchange should belong to the individual worker， not to government or tobusiness.

　　As a saying goes， “God helps those help themselves”， which is true in mostcases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by thetechnological and market changes are concerned， I believe the government and thebusiness certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.

　　开头方法二、 可以适当的复述一下题目，然后稍作让步，再表达自己的观点和立场

　　“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests，their leisure activities， even their appearance way from the work place.”

　　The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests，recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personallives of some people are largely determined by their work， in my view it wouldbe a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation， the extent towhich occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work， andhow central the work is to one’s sense of self.

　　“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

　　I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we areinfluenced by the exterior shape of buildings， as well as by the arrangement ofmultiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aestheticelements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basicpersonality traits， I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes，moods， and even life styles.

　　开头方法三、新托福写作可以以提问方式开头，阐述自己的观点，再表明自己的立场

　　“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workerswill lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to suchchange should belong to the individual worker， not to government or tobusiness.”

　　As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete，who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals haveprimary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work， both industryand government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.

　　开头方法四、可以先表明自己的立场，再阐述原因

　　Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish largebureaucracies， but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is toa government.

　　Contrary to the statement’s premise， my view is that businesses are lesslikely than government to establish large bureaucracies， because businesses knowthat they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting frombureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense andby observation.