托福写作范文：为了吸引游客政府应该增强安保或修缮旧楼

　　托福写作题目：

　　In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety byhiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings andstreets.

　　托福写作范文：

　　Nowadays, for the economic development of a city, the government placeundue emphasis on how to boost its tourism industry. While some experts showtheir enthusiasm on selling their cities to outside tourists by publicizing goodsocial security via recruiting more police, I hold a different opinion. From myperspective, improving old buildings and streets is a better alternative.

　　Admittedly, hiring more police might be useful in attracting tourists. Whengovernment is focusing on recruiting more policemen, these new recruiters wouldbe helpful in improving social security standards. Thanks to the improvedstandards, more visitors might be relieved about the city when paying a visit tothe city; hence the the city reputation would be enhanced. However, on balance,only focusing on police while not improving building places of interest is notenough. Without places about culture or places for amusement parks, visitorsstill would not come even if social security is good. To attract more visitors,a more effective way would be to improve olds buildings.

　　To begin with, improving old buildings helps preserve old cultures. Inother words, more visitors would love to visit places with cultural value so themaintenance of old buildings is attractive to them. For example, when Beijinggovernment begins to repair the Great Wall, the symbol of diligence of ancientChinese people, the experts pay great attention on building the wrecked wallsand restoring some stone relics. Meanwhile, they reshape some broken bricks forthe steps so that visitors could step onto the Great Wall. As a result, anincreasing number of visitors from foreign countries come to Beijing to watchthe marvelous Great Wall building on top of piles of mountains. On the contrary,if hiring more police, though government would gain reputation for their goodmanagement in social security, it would not add to any cultural attraction.

　　In addition, improving the streets makes it convenient for tourists. That'sis to say, tourists would love to visit places with convenient facilities.According to a survey conducted on Sina Weibo, after polling hundreds oftourists from the National Holiday, a significant percentage of them claim thatwhen deciding a place as their touring destination, they are more likely tochoose a city with broader streets. In their minds, when the city is built withconvenient streets and beautiful auxiliary facilities, this urban planning wouldgive tourists a sense of modernism and make them feel go into colorfulmetropolitan life. With these perfect streets, public transport would beconvenient for them to visit both in city and around city.

　　To sum up, due to the reasons I lost above, I would regard that byperfecting streets and maintaining old buildings, government would be morelikely to attract tourists to visit the city.