托福写作解析:agree or disagree
托福独立写作练习题目:
Children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phones, video games for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children' s development.
孩子们过多地依赖科技(比如电脑、智能手机和电子游戏)来娱乐。玩简单点的玩具或者与朋友一起在外面玩对孩子们的发展更好。
写作参考思路:
观点:
电脑、智能手机等电子设备遍及每个家庭,孩子们在这里面花的时间越来越多。有人认为在玩简单点的玩具或者和朋友一起在外面玩才有助于孩子们的发展。但是我的观点截然相反。
Opinion:
As electronic devices like computers and smart phones are popular in every home, children have spent more and more time on them. With growing concerns about children's future development, some people think playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better. However, I do hold a different view.
理由1:
随着科技的进步,电子产品的功能越来越强大,客户体验也越来越好。所以孩子们从电脑、智能手机和电子游戏中获得的乐趣比他们在简单的玩具或在外面玩中所获得的要多。
Reason 1:
With the development of technology, electronic products are becoming more and more powerful, and customer experience is improved as well. In this way, children can get more fun and joy from these products than that from playing simpler toys or playing outside.
理由2:
现在,互联网教育(比如可汗学院)越来越被人们认可。孩子们通过电脑或智能手机来学知识,已是非常正常的现象。甚至还有些电子游戏,其设计目标就是锻炼孩子们的思维等能力。
Reason 2:
Nowadays, Internet Education such as Khan Academy is increasingly acknowledged by people. It is a common phenomenon for children to learn knowledge through computers or smart phones. There are even some video games that are designed to practice children’s ability of thinking and other abilities.
总结:
科技使生活更美好。只要家长和学校正确引导孩子,不让他们沉迷其中,那么这些电子产品会对孩子们的发展起到积极作用。
Summary:
Technology makes life better. As long as parents and the school work together and guide correctly to prevent their children from getting addicted, these electronic products would have positive influences on their development.
Tip
对于“agree or disagree”的题目,同学们的中心观点可以是同意(agree),可以是不同意(disagree),也可以是是视情况而定(it depends)。
参考提纲的中心观点就是不同意(disagree),如果中心观点是同意(agree),那么可以考虑从以下角度进行分析阐述:
1.电脑、手机、电子游戏等都是虚拟的,玩现实中的玩具更能锻炼动手能力;
2.和朋友一起去外面玩,既可以接触大自然、锻炼身体,还可以加深友谊、认识更多的人
3.……