托福写作语料库积累：哪种朋友最重要(二)

　　Thefriends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you canget help from?

　　你喜欢交可以给你带来快乐的朋友还是可以帮助你的朋友?

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　　11. Prosperity helps us make friends，however，adversity helps us try them.

　　富贵易交友，患难见真情。(作家观点)

　　【点评】：try sb v 考验某人

　　12. A friend in need is a friend in deed

　　患难见真情

　　【点评】：in need adv 在危难中

　　【点评】：in deed adv 真正地

　　13. The most essential standard to judge a true friend is whether he or she willprovide us with timely support in time of plight.

　　判断好友的最重要的标准就是，是否他或她愿意在逆境中给我们提供及时的帮助(观点总结)

　　14. Whenever I run into unexpected adverse circumstances， it is Sandy thatprovides me with emotional support and spiritual consolation.

　　无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境，Sandy 总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神安慰。(例证支持)

　　15. I believe true friend can surpass the age limitation. I always take my father asmy trustworthy friend from whom I really benefit a great deal.

　　我相信好友是超越年龄的限制，我一直认为爸爸是值得信赖的朋友，从他身上我获益良多。(细节展开)

　　【点评】：重视自我情感的自由写作

　　16. This debate reminds me of the experience of striving for attending my dreamgraduate school. After failing the exam for two times, I thought of giving up halfway,however, my father provided me with an ocean of assistance both financially andspiritually.

　　话题使我联想起我为考研奋斗的经历，两次尝试失败过后，我曾经想过放弃，但是，我的爸爸给我提供了经济和精神方面的巨大的支持。(细节展开)

　　【点评】：重视自我情感的自由写作，更加容易文思泉涌，更加容易打动考官，因为我们先感动了自己。

　　17. Instead of curling into a ball beneath the table， I ended up mustering up mycourage, learning from my failure and marching courageously towards the nextopportunity.

　　我没有蜷缩成球，藏在桌下， 相反，我最终鼓起勇气， 从失败中学习，为争取下次机会努力前行(作家文采)

　　【点评】：curl into a ball beneath the table 蜷缩成球，藏在桌下(比喻用法)

　　【点评】：end up doing sth v 最终以 …… 为结局(精彩表达)

　　【点评】：muster up one’s courage to do sth 鼓起勇气做 …… (推荐背诵)

　　【点评】：march courageously towards ……v 向着 …… 勇敢前行

　　18. A humorous friend can never fail to help us to see the sunny side, especiallywhen we feel frustrated and depressed.

　　幽默的朋友可以帮助我们看到积极的一面，尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。

　　【点评】：never fail to = always adv 一直……

　　点评：第一人称写法更加有说服力

　　19. A humorous friend can, to large extent, help us remain cheerful in time ofadversity.

　　富有幽默感的朋友，可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪。

　　【 点评】：remain cheerful = see the sunny side = be optimistic about …… v 保持乐观

　　20. Opting for friends who are willing to give unselfish help outshines choosingfriends with whom we can feel the sense of humor.

　　选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友.

　　【点评】：核心观点句：主题句亮剑或者尾段总结作家立场。