托福独立写作结构应该如何搭建

　　很多同学会认为，好的结构，就是给段落的开头加上first, second, 给结尾加上in conclusion，但这种观点并不准确。

　　OG中指出 “be aware that just using transition words, such as first or second does not guarantee that your essay is organized. The points you make must all relate to the topic of the essay and to the main idea you are presenting in response.”

　　也就是说，只用“首先”，“其次”这类词并不能够保证organization部分的得分。

　　想要得到高分，还需要保证unity(统一), progression(推进), and coherence(连贯)，也就是所给出的分论点能够证明总论点，并且段落中的每一句话都能够证明分论点，即文章要扣题。