托福写作高分句式分析:论证事例
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原文材料:
When it comes to accounting scandals and the corporate cover-ups that follow, there is little that is uniquely Japanese.
推荐句型:
When it comes to…, there is little that is uniquely + adj.
When it comes to…, there is little that is confined to + n.
推荐理由:
“当谈及某个问题的时候,并非仅仅局限于 …” 在独立写作的论证展开过程中,我们往往会举例子来佐证我们的论点。但例子是具有唯一性的,这时候,在例子后面加上这么一句“谈及某个问题,这并非仅仅局限于上述的案例”,是不是一下子就打破了例证的唯一性了( zhuangbility)!我们当然也可以做一些微整形,将其变为否定句,用于说理的时候反驳论点。
原创例句:
1. When it comes to the ever growing financial pressure and the negative impacts on both mental and physiological state that follow, there is little that is uniquely middle-aged.
2. When it comes to the fierce competition between friends and potential impacts on their friendships that follow, there is little that is uniquely negative.
3. When it comes to the successful development of a country and related investments that follow, there is little that is confined to improving educational quality.
学以致用:
1. Money is the most important aspect in a job.
此题为最高级的题型,对于没钱的来说钱确实很重要,没钱人其实可以在细分,比如工作一段时间之后的中年人,以及刚开始工作的年轻人,我们在说完中年人的例子之后紧跟着就可以用上面第一个例句进行过渡。
2. Competition with friends usually have negative effect on friendship.
针对竞争对于友谊的影响,如果我们持一个反对的态度,是不是就可以用上面的句型来说:竞争之于友谊并非仅仅是负面的。一个宿舍中某人学习勤奋,带动其他学生一起努力进步的事不在少数。
3. Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.
谈及到国家的成功发展和政府相对应的投资时,我们也不该只把目光局限于教育的改善。无论是政治,经济还是军事,和一个国家的成功都是息息相关的,第三个例句就可以直接用上。
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