托福写作范文点评和思路解析：住小镇好还是大城市好?

　　和谐英语网为同学们整理了托福写作范文点评和思路解析：住小镇好还是大城市好?，供考生参考学习。

　　写作难点话题一览

　　Live in a small town or in a big city?

　　Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

　　写作思路展开结构分析

　　考生完全可以结合自己的实际情况来写。两种选择的优缺点其实都是比较明显的。具体来看，生活在大城市的优缺点是信息发达、工作机会多、生活设施完善但是人情淡薄;而生活在小城镇的优缺点是环境温馨，安静，空气好;人们相互了解、友善但是信息闭塞、没有好的工作发展机会等等。当然大家也可以采取"it depends"的策略，不同的阶段有不同的偏好来展开同样也是不错的写法思路。

　　本话题高分范文赏析

　　People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It's a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.

　　Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there're more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in a small town. For families,children's education is always put in the first place. Finally, living in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; there are even much more television channels in big cities.

　　However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drive so fast in a small town as to cause car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with.

　　According to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my country—Beijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small town when I get retired one day.