名师点评网友BEC初级作文(3)

网友作文五：
As the director board agreed to move toward a merger between our company and Mason, [1] the name of company will be changed. The new name MasonGolding become effective from next month[2].Please be noticed.

名师点评：
[1]好罗嗦的原因啊，董事会的决定你就不用提了。
[2]太长的时间，也太不具体。