2010年6月大学英语四级写作思路突破(5)
2010-03-01来源:和谐英语
答案与解析
训练一
【范文】
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.
Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.
Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.
【点评】来源：和谐英语学习网
文章描述大学生当村官这一现象，并分析其带来的诸多好处。第二段运用Above all, in addition, 引出了两点好处，在使用First, Secondly将第一点好处细化，这样使文章层次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的语言，使文章增色不少，例如：contribute a lot to，speed the development，a win-win choice等等。
训练一
【范文】
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.
Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.
Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.
【点评】来源：和谐英语学习网
文章描述大学生当村官这一现象，并分析其带来的诸多好处。第二段运用Above all, in addition, 引出了两点好处，在使用First, Secondly将第一点好处细化，这样使文章层次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的语言，使文章增色不少，例如：contribute a lot to，speed the development，a win-win choice等等。
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