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2010年6月英语四级作文命题分析与指导

2010-03-15来源:和谐英语
  (二)写作“四步定位法”实例讲解
  对历年的真题分析可知,常考的四级作文体裁主要有三种——说明文、议论文和应用文,所以接下来就通过具体的例子,来讲解如何使用作文“定位法”写作这三种体裁的四级英语作文
  1.议论文
  【题目】Will E-books replace traditional books?
  【提纲】1). 随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多
  2). 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书,理由是……
  3). 我的看法
  一定中心:本文属于提纲式命题的议论文,题目是“Will Ebooks replace traditional books”,属于疑问式的题目,所以必须做出肯定或否定回答。同学们可以按照自己的想法,提出“E-books will replace traditional books”或“E-books won’t replace traditional books”的看法。
  二定方法:可以先讲道理,再举例(具体见后面的范文)。
  三定结构:提纲有三点要求,第一点属于“提出问题”部分,第二点属于“分析问题”部分(分析别人的观点),第三点也属于“分析问题”部分(提出自己的观点,并作简单论证),也就是对题目的回答和简单说明。整个提纲都没有涉及到“解决问题”部分。所以,可以初步确定本文可以分为两大部分、三个段落,即“提出问题”和“分析问题”(别人和自己的观点)两个部分,现象解释、别人的观点、自己的观点三个段落。
  因此,可以确定出如下的结构:来源:和谐英语学习
  第一部分,解释电子图书越来越多的现象,理论归因为“信息技术的发展”,并举例说明其“越来越多”,通过讲道理和摆事实拓展提纲的第一点。
  第二部分可以分为两段,第一段是别人的观点(提纲的第二点),第二段是自己的观点(提纲的第三点)。别人的观点又包括观点和原因两个部分,在简单陈述观点后,至少应该指出两点原因来论证这种观点。可以通过讲道理,但最好运用讲道理和摆事实相结合的方法予以论证。第三点也如此,只不过是表明自己的观点而已。
  可用英文简单表述成:
  Para. 1:Phenomenon: ubiquitous E-books nowadays/Ebooks become more popular
  Reasons: the development of information technology (IT)
  Examples: E-products/e-based products—e-mails, e-tickets, e-tests, e-books etc.
  Para. 2:Some persons’ view: E-books will replace traditional books.
  Reasons: advantages of Ebooks; disadvantages of traditional books
  Examples: read online without payment; immediate reading newly headline information
  Para. 3:(possible version 1)
  My view: agree
  Reasons: advantages of Ebooks; (convenient and accessible; easily storing and place-saving; easy-reading; environment protection)
  Examples: bamboo-based books replaced by paperbased books
  (possible version 2)
  My view: disagree
  Reasons: advantages of traditional books
  Examples: reading traditional books is good for eyes/healthy
  (possible version 3)
  My view: (neither totally agree nor totally disagree) coexist
  Reasons: both has its advantages of existing
  Examples: young people like Ebooks, while the old like traditional books;coexisting of camera and painting
  四定句式:灵活使用四种句子结构,采用长短句间隔的写法。
  【范文】
  Possible version 1:agree来源:http://www.hxen.net
  With the developing of information technology, we are living in an e-era, where E-based products have become more and more popular/ are ubiquitous. E-mails, e-tickets and e-books have played a growing role in our daily life, while paper-based materials, such as traditional books, are suffering a great loss of their readers.
  Some people believe that E-books will replace the traditional books eventually because of its obvious advantages. Firstly, they are convenient and accessible. You can read so many kinds of interesting e-books without paying any money just if you have a computer connecting to the internet. Secondly, reading e-books has developed into part of our daily life. We can easily get latest headline information just by clicking a mouse gently without hearing noise made by frequently thumbing pages.
  As far as I’m concerned, I hold/share the same opinion with above persons. Besides the reasons offered by them, E-books are so beneficial for forest protection that they are greatly helpful in saving energy and protecting environment. Just as bamboo-based books were put an end by history, traditional books will lose its all readers and disappear/vanish in the future.
  Possible version 2:disagree(前两段同上)
  As for me, a long-time book worm, it’s not likely/impossible for E-books to replace traditional books. There are enough reasons which make traditional books survive. For example, long time of reading E-books will do harm to our eyes, and readers will find themselves more accessible to printed materials because of unpopularity of computers and the internet to every corner of our life.
  Possible version 3:co-exist (前两段同上)
  From my perspective, I firmly believe e-books can not take the traditional books’ place totally. They will unquestionably co-exist for a long period. Although the e-books offer us lots of favorable consequences, the traditional books can provide us opportunities to take note on them and to be easy for collection. Therefore, e-books and traditional books are preferable to different people, and both of them can bring us benefits.
  下面是一个根据“定位法”整理出的现成的议论文写作模板,供各位考生借鉴,既可以根据实际情况灵活应用,也有助于加深对作文“定位法”的理解,进一步掌握其精神实质。只有这样“有形加无形”,才能以不变应万变,轻松应对考试。