2010年6月英语四级作文命题分析与指导
2010-03-15来源:和谐英语
第一段
There is no denying the fact that .描述现象，引起话题
To begin with, .主题展开句1
What’s more, .主题展开句2
第二段
There are many reasons accounting for .承上启下,解释这一现象的原因
The main reason is .说明原因一
Furthermore, .原因二
The last but not the least, .原因三
As a result, .讲述导致的结果
第三段
As far as I’m concerned, .作者的态度
For one thing, .观点一
For another, .观点二
In conclusion, .总结全文
2.说明文
(略)
3.应用文
(略)
另外，需要强调和说明的一点是：虽然应用文本身有自己的格式要求，必须要按照固定的格式来写，但是最关键的还是要按照提纲的内容来写。换句话说，应用文就是具有某种特定格式要求的说明文或者议论文。
再者，应用文虽然种类繁多、格式各异，但是除了一些客套话语和内容的表达不同之外，其格式上仍有一些相似的、可循的固定规律。例如：
(1)日期均在开头的右上方，其格式为：月/日/年或日/月/年，而不是年/月/日。
(2)称呼后均用逗号，不能用冒号。……
(略)来源：和谐英语学习网
常用句型或表达方法
普通信件(1)I’m very happy to receive your letter about…
(2)Thank you for you to offer me the help to…
(3)I’m writing the letter in purpose of…
(4)My thanks for you are beyond words.
(5)I’ve been looking forward to hearing from you soon.
(6)Your prompt reply to my letter would be highly appreciated.
通知 (7)Your attention, please…
(8)This is to note/notice/announce that…
(略)
二、写作应试技巧点拨
写作是作者利用自己所具备的知识来表达观点和情感的一种复杂过程，深受作者自身的知识结构、所处环境和情感等主客观因素的影响，应该是一种主动的、有感而发的自然过程，并没有固定的规律和方法可循。但是，作为一种考试形式，作文却是一种被动的(固定题目或范围的写作)主动表达过程，有其自身的规律性和写作技巧，尤其是四、六级英语作文，它有一定的写作套路和独特的固定模式，考生可以通过大量的模仿练习来提高自己的写作能力，丰富自己的写作技巧，顺利通过考试，为将来的进一步学习和工作奠定良好的写作基础。
四级作文基本上是命题作文或提纲作文，大部分是要求考生就某种现实现象或观点发表自己的看法，内容多是考生所熟悉的生活题材，所以写好四级作文有两个关键点：第一，根据英文的表达习惯来安排写作结构;第二，用自己熟悉的英文词汇、句式和句型正确地写出自己的观点和看法。因此，这里按照起、承、转、合的结构安排，详细介绍一些写作中常用的重点关联词语、词汇、句式及句型。
(一)起
起，就是开门见山地提出自己的观点和看法，文章的第一段和每段的第一句都是起，常会用到一些表示现在的时间状语，如：nowadays, presently, now, with the coming of…等。下面是一些常用的句型结构：
1.观点/现象型
(1)When it comes to…, different people hold different views. Some argue that…, while others believe that…
(2) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that…
(3) Nowadays, it is generally believed that…, but I doubt whether…
(4) As is known to all,…(谚语或名言). A case in point is that…
2.描述型(略)
(二)承(略)
(三)转(略)
(四)合(略)来源：和谐英语学习网
三、写作真题例析(略)
四、写作真题演练
Test 1
2008年12月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用
2.由此带来的问题
3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Test 2
2008年6月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生，我的看法
Test 3
2007年12月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of What Electives to Choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2.学生因为各种原因选修了不同的选修课
3.以你自己为例……
Test 4
2007年6月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.本社团活动的主要内容
2.参加本社团活动的好处
3.如何加入本社团
五、写作真题演练参考范文
Test 1
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
With its great advantage of convenience and endurance, disposable plastic bags are being widely used and have been an indispensable part of our daily life. We’ve been used to enjoying receiving free plastic bags offered by shop assistants, whenever we buy clothes, shoes and food at supermarkets or department stores. It seems that life without them is unimaginable for most of us.
However, they do cause a lot of problems, especially bringing severe damage to our environment. Not only do they affect the beautifulness of our living settings，but also do harm to our health，because they are made from some kind of chemical material which can not be disposable. Once we burn them or bury them, they may pollute our air or water heavily.
Thus, it’s imperative for us to take effective measures to limit the use of disposable plastic bags. Such actions are of great significance. Its helpful in saving natural resource besides making our cities’ faces clean and beautiful. Furthermore, it can help reduce harmful damage to environment and thus to our human’s health. In view of current bad effects made by using disposable plastic bags, we everyone are responsible for limiting their use. Only in this way can we have a bright future.
(略)
There is no denying the fact that .描述现象，引起话题
To begin with, .主题展开句1
What’s more, .主题展开句2
第二段
There are many reasons accounting for .承上启下,解释这一现象的原因
The main reason is .说明原因一
Furthermore, .原因二
The last but not the least, .原因三
As a result, .讲述导致的结果
第三段
As far as I’m concerned, .作者的态度
For one thing, .观点一
For another, .观点二
In conclusion, .总结全文
2.说明文
(略)
3.应用文
(略)
另外，需要强调和说明的一点是：虽然应用文本身有自己的格式要求，必须要按照固定的格式来写，但是最关键的还是要按照提纲的内容来写。换句话说，应用文就是具有某种特定格式要求的说明文或者议论文。
再者，应用文虽然种类繁多、格式各异，但是除了一些客套话语和内容的表达不同之外，其格式上仍有一些相似的、可循的固定规律。例如：
(1)日期均在开头的右上方，其格式为：月/日/年或日/月/年，而不是年/月/日。
(2)称呼后均用逗号，不能用冒号。……
(略)来源：和谐英语学习网
常用句型或表达方法
普通信件(1)I’m very happy to receive your letter about…
(2)Thank you for you to offer me the help to…
(3)I’m writing the letter in purpose of…
(4)My thanks for you are beyond words.
(5)I’ve been looking forward to hearing from you soon.
(6)Your prompt reply to my letter would be highly appreciated.
通知 (7)Your attention, please…
(8)This is to note/notice/announce that…
(略)
二、写作应试技巧点拨
写作是作者利用自己所具备的知识来表达观点和情感的一种复杂过程，深受作者自身的知识结构、所处环境和情感等主客观因素的影响，应该是一种主动的、有感而发的自然过程，并没有固定的规律和方法可循。但是，作为一种考试形式，作文却是一种被动的(固定题目或范围的写作)主动表达过程，有其自身的规律性和写作技巧，尤其是四、六级英语作文，它有一定的写作套路和独特的固定模式，考生可以通过大量的模仿练习来提高自己的写作能力，丰富自己的写作技巧，顺利通过考试，为将来的进一步学习和工作奠定良好的写作基础。
四级作文基本上是命题作文或提纲作文，大部分是要求考生就某种现实现象或观点发表自己的看法，内容多是考生所熟悉的生活题材，所以写好四级作文有两个关键点：第一，根据英文的表达习惯来安排写作结构;第二，用自己熟悉的英文词汇、句式和句型正确地写出自己的观点和看法。因此，这里按照起、承、转、合的结构安排，详细介绍一些写作中常用的重点关联词语、词汇、句式及句型。
(一)起
起，就是开门见山地提出自己的观点和看法，文章的第一段和每段的第一句都是起，常会用到一些表示现在的时间状语，如：nowadays, presently, now, with the coming of…等。下面是一些常用的句型结构：
1.观点/现象型
(1)When it comes to…, different people hold different views. Some argue that…, while others believe that…
(2) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that…
(3) Nowadays, it is generally believed that…, but I doubt whether…
(4) As is known to all,…(谚语或名言). A case in point is that…
2.描述型(略)
(二)承(略)
(三)转(略)
(四)合(略)来源：和谐英语学习网
三、写作真题例析(略)
四、写作真题演练
Test 1
2008年12月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用
2.由此带来的问题
3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Test 2
2008年6月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.娱乐活动多种多样
2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3.作为大学生，我的看法
Test 3
2007年12月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of What Electives to Choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2.学生因为各种原因选修了不同的选修课
3.以你自己为例……
Test 4
2007年6月真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow.
1.本社团活动的主要内容
2.参加本社团活动的好处
3.如何加入本社团
五、写作真题演练参考范文
Test 1
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
With its great advantage of convenience and endurance, disposable plastic bags are being widely used and have been an indispensable part of our daily life. We’ve been used to enjoying receiving free plastic bags offered by shop assistants, whenever we buy clothes, shoes and food at supermarkets or department stores. It seems that life without them is unimaginable for most of us.
However, they do cause a lot of problems, especially bringing severe damage to our environment. Not only do they affect the beautifulness of our living settings，but also do harm to our health，because they are made from some kind of chemical material which can not be disposable. Once we burn them or bury them, they may pollute our air or water heavily.
Thus, it’s imperative for us to take effective measures to limit the use of disposable plastic bags. Such actions are of great significance. Its helpful in saving natural resource besides making our cities’ faces clean and beautiful. Furthermore, it can help reduce harmful damage to environment and thus to our human’s health. In view of current bad effects made by using disposable plastic bags, we everyone are responsible for limiting their use. Only in this way can we have a bright future.
(略)
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