和谐英语

2008年12月大学英语六级作文预测:不文明行为

2008-09-26来源:
   Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
  1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为,叙述你的一次相关经历。
  2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。
  3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。
  ●审题概述●
  这是一篇议论文,可以根据作文要求列出提纲:第一部分,列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分,不文明行为的影响,一两个即可;第三部分,提出建议。
  “范文”
  Immoral Behavior in Public
  To witness ①immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
  ①Immoral behaviors in public ②initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ③sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people's rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
  The reform of① this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ②implementation and ③cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
  We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ①shares the huge responsibility of ②demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
  ◇第一段思路点评:
   作文要求第一点,相关经历
  ◇语言点提示:
   ① immoral behavior in public:直接点题
  ◇第二段思路点评:
   不文明行为的影响
  ◇语言点提示:
   ① immoral behavior in public:重复名词词组,与第一段衔接
   ② initiate:意思是“产生,发动”
   ③sense of social responsibility:意思是“社会责任感”
  ◇第三段思路点评:
   如何改善这些现象
  ◇语言点提示:
   ① this phenomenon:指代前文“immoral behavior in public”,与上文衔接,且避免重复
   ②implementation:意为“执行,实施”
   ③cost effectiveness:意为“成本效率”
   ④ common good:意为“公益”
  ◇第四段思路点评:
  总结
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”
   ②demonstrate:意为“展现”