和谐英语

2008年12月英语六级写作预测:出国留学申请信

2008-09-26来源:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
  1. 介绍你目前所学专业;
  2. 介绍个人特长爱好以及性格;
  3. 说明为什么申请该校的MBA.
  ●审题概述●
  这是一封留学申请信。要提供申请人的个人资历,写明申请学校和所学专业以及申请的理由。
  “范文”
Dear Sir,
  ①I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
  My name is Li Ming, and I am an ①undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students' Union. I am careful to ②keep a balance between study and ③extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student's Union work.
  I'm interested in business and wish I could ①further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely ②congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
  ◇第一段思路点评:
   直接表明要申请的专业
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①I am writing in the hope that:申请信常用句式
  ◇第二段思路点评:
   个人情况简介
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①undergraduate:意为“大学生”
   ②keep a balance between:意为“保持平衡”
   ③extracurricular activities:意为“课外活动”
  ◇第三段思路点评:
   说明申请该校的原因
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①further:意为“促进,进一步”
   ②congruent with:意为“适合的,适当的”