解读2010年6月大学英语六级写作(9)

　　第五章 实战演练——六级作文模拟训练及范文
　　模拟训练一
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1. 现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人;
　　2. 为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注;
　　3. 你怎么看?为什么?
　　Attending TV PK Shows Does (No) Good to Young People
　　模拟训练二
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There is a Will There is a Way. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
　　1.简单解释对此谚语的理解;
　　2.用失败与成功的实例说明毅力对于成功的重要性;
　　3.总结全文。
　　Where There is a Will There is a Way
　　模拟训练三
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Campaign Speech. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
　　1. 你认为自己具备什么条件(能力、性格、爱好)学生会主席?
　　2. 如果当选，你将会为校园学生做什么?
　　A Campaign Speech
　　参考范文
　　模拟训练一
　　【范文】
　　Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
　　In recent years, TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.
　　It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun have stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.Several factors contribute to my argument.First of all, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.
　　To sum up, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows.
　　【点评】
　　文章以描述现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引许多年轻人开始进入主题，人们对此持不同观点。第一段文章结尾作者表明参加电视选秀节目对年轻人没有好处，接着说明自己的理由，最后使用In a word引出对文章的总结，并提醒年轻人要三思而后行。另外，本文使用了一些精彩的语句，使文章增色不少，例如：great hits，in the hope of，does no good to，hunt after fame at whatever cost，suffer a psychological unbalance，think twice before deciding等等。
　　模拟训练二
　　【范文】
　　Where There is A Will,There is A Way
　　Where there is a will, there is a way.This statement means that if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well.The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.
　　Ninety percent of the failures that occur are due to the fact that there is no strong will involved.Many people simply say that they want something, but they do not make any attempt to achieve it.So, instead of getting it, they use the feeblest excuse to explain the situation away.
　　Only those with an undaunted will and spirit can fight their way to final victory.Many a famous man has the same experience.They have attained their status because they have had the will to overcome apparently insuperable obstacles.Many artists,statesmen,writers and inventors have managed to succeed because they possess a fierce will,which has helped them to achieve success.
　　According to the above statements, we can see that what one needs is a strong will.Weak-willed people never climb to the top.They crumble at the slightest use of force against them.Strong-willed people, on the other hand,will stand up against all odds and will make it a point to succeed ultimately.
　　【点评】
　　本文属于观点论证型作文。其中的观点是一句英语谚语。文章首先以解释说明谚语的含义入手进入主题，紧接着分析成功与失败的原因，逐步论证毅力对于成功至关重要这一观点，最后总结说明一个人要取得成功所要具备的素质。这样文章对观点的分析透彻又有深度。另外文中使用的精彩语句包括：due to，many a famous man，overcome apparently insuperable obstacles，stand up against all odds等等。
　　模拟训练三
　　【范文】
　　A Campaign Speech
　　Good morning, everyone:
　　I am a sophomore student.I am especially honored in having this chance today to work out a new prospect of our Student Union.
　　As for the position of President, I find I am quite qualified.Firstly, I do possess the ability required of this post.In the past 2 years, I have been serving as Class President, and I know the importance and art of management.In addition, my personality fits ideally in for the past.I have been growing up in a loving environment, nursing an optimistic nature out of me.And in my dictionary, there is no such word as “difficulty”.Last but not least, nothing can be more important than my various hobbies in helping build up a teamwork with fellow students.
　　My fellow students, if I am fortunately chosen to be President by you, I’ll do my utmost.I’ll work to build up a fantastic teamwork to better the efficiency of the Union and better serve the student body.More exciting and significant activities are awaiting you to participate in.I won’t let you down.
　　Thanks for your attention.
　　【点评】
　　本文是一篇竞选演讲词。文章首先表达心情，做一下简单自我介绍，进一步说明自己竞选此职务的原因，最后展望未来做出承诺，以表示感谢的语句结束演讲。文章符合演讲的格式以及内容要求。其中精彩语句，例如：work out a new prospect，an optimistic nature，build up a teamwork with，以及句式I won’t let you down.的使用使文章极具煽动力，起到很好的演讲效果。