雅思写作7分并不难

　　7.5分考生范文选段：对固定不变的定罪制度的分析

　　On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. ‖Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. ‖This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. ‖If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

　　1. 观点：固定的惩罚制度对社会有威慑力。(fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society。)

　　2. 理由：考虑犯罪成本(reconsider committing crimes in the first place)

　　3. 扩展结果：有利于社会稳定(lead to social stability and security through minimizing the number of crimes committed.)

　　4. 理由：如果没有固定的定罪制度，会使犯罪分子更猖狂。(If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of , penal decisions would be largely arbitrary.)

　　5. 扩展结果：犯罪分子逍遥法外，不利于司法公正。(criminals getting away with their crimes and a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.)

　　3. 对策

　　① 复习真题，找生词

　　在考题中，经常出现核心词汇的重复，比如：distance learning, criminal等。建议考生们可以在复习写作时，先把近两年的写作题目过一遍，查查生词。这样做可以大大降低考生在作文题中遭遇生词的尴尬，提高审题的准确性。

　　②掌握不同题型大作文的写作重点

　　观点类：可以支持、反对、中立，一定要表达自己的观点。论据要充分，举例不可或缺。

　　分析解决类：所问即所答，重点分析原因，解决方法多角度。

　　③八大话题，重点突破

　　在考题中，“教育，科技，环保，全球化，政府，媒体，工作，社会生活”为常考的八大话题。复习重点有以下几方面：1. 每个话题的核心词汇要烂熟于心。2. 每个话题要积累至少两个可以作举例论证的实例。3. 每个话题至少选择两道题目做brainstorming思路拓展练习。4. 每个话题要至少积累两篇范文。5. 每个考生对自己不熟悉的话题，要加强以上练习。