雅思写作7分并不难

　　二. Coherence and cohesion

　　1. 具体要求

　　Coherence and cohesion表示连贯统一。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这样的要求：

　　1. Logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout

　　2. Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under/over-use

　　3. Presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

　　①文章结构富有逻辑性。②正确使用多种衔接方法。③每段话的中心思想明确。

　　2. 范例评析

　　▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

　　Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.

　　Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　7.5分考生范文选段：考生回答应当如何对罪犯的犯罪行为定罪。

　　In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity. There have to be fixed punishment for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Competition Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thieves stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger. Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.

　　1. 中心思想：对于犯罪分子的定罪应该有折中的方法，这才是保证公平公正的方法。(an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.)