雅思考官的权威写作辅导(英)

　　Relating back to the question asked

　　It's not enough that the points you make are relevant to the topic that the question is about, you need to show how they are relevant by relating those points back to the question asked.

　　If you don't relate the points you are making back to the question it's very possible that one of the following might happen,

　　A.The examiner might not get your point. Without you there to explain it, it's possible they might not see why you included that point no matter how obvious it seems to you.

　　B.The examiner might not believe that you understand the relevance of your point. It is possible that you are just including lots of points at random hoping that at least some are relevant (known as the 'shotgun approach'). This is not the sort of impression you want to make, so make it clear you know what you are doing.

　　As well as these two major issues, there are some minor stylistic habits you should try to avoid is possible.

　　×using cliches (陈词滥调)

　　×using rhetorical questions

　　×run on sentences (sentences lasting 4 lines or more)

　　×using the same word repeatedly

　　×using more than two commas in one sentence

　　×your entire answer being one long paragraph (no line breaks)

　　The Conclusion

　　The conclusion of an essay is where you sum up and offer some kind of overall evaluation. Here, you show your ability not only to repeat the facts, but to use them. Like the introduction the conclusion should be short, preferably one paragraph.

　　You should summarise your argument concisely - it should follow from the information you have introduced throughout the essay. This is linked to the approach to the answer you mentioned in your intro. At this stage you need to evaluate the results of your approach. Again this depends on the type of question asked.