雅思写作高分大作文范文:在家办公学习的利弊
With computers and Internet, people can study and work without going to school or company.Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
题目讲解
Distance learning/working是一个经典话题,历年来考过多次。但是今年technology 确实考得不多,只有在3月13日考到printed books & electronic books。 这种经典老题一定要注意题目的不同出法。考生可以尝试把这次的题目和下面的老题做下对比。
20130302 Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
20130718 In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
C8T3 Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
审题要点:
1.题目中出现了study和work,所以学习和工作两面都要涉及到
2.Computer和Internet可讲内容较多,大家不要过度扩大话题
思路分析:
Advantage:方便
Disadvantages:工作时间不定、学习和工作质量、身体锻炼减少
I personally believe it is not necessarily bliss for people to study and work wherever they wish rather than in schools or companies.
我个人认为,人们希望在任何地方学习和工作,而不是在学校或公司工作,这未必是一种幸福。
It is understandable why some people are overwhelmed by the possibility that they can free themselves from commuting every day, sustaining themselves simply by clicking the mouse or touching the screen. They are exhilarated by the hallucination that they were longer to toil and could fully savor the comfortable life brought by technology. Nonetheless, the reality shows a different picture and such a lifestyle could also bring thorny problems.
这是可以理解的,为什么有些人每天都能从通勤中解脱出来,仅仅通过点击鼠标或触摸屏幕来维持自己的生活。他们被幻觉所鼓舞,因为他们的工作时间更长,而且能够充分享受科技带来的舒适生活。尽管如此,现实情况却截然不同,这种生活方式也可能带来棘手的问题。
Firstly, students and employees may feel physically unbound to study or work, yet the almighty technology could actually increase their work pressure and make them become tethered around tasks without much rest. This is typically ture for office workers. In the past, many of them has a fixed schedule each day, which was usually terminated when they clock out. With technologies such as email and mobile phone, however, managers are endowed with the ability to find employees whenever they like: consequently, people will gradually realize that they can hardly distinguish their life from work. Some employees, for instance, are called to attend video meetings even when they are on vocation.
首先,学生和员工可能觉得身体不受学习和工作的束缚,但全能的技术实际上会增加他们的工作压力,使他们在没有休息的情况下被拴在工作上。这对办公室职员来说是很典型的。在过去,他们中的许多人每天都有固定的日程安排,当他们打卡下班时,通常会被终止。然而,随着电子邮件和移动电话等技术的发展,经理们被赋予了随时随地找到员工的能力:因此,人们将逐渐意识到,他们很难将自己的生活与工作区分开来。例如,有些员工甚至在休假时都被叫去参加视频会议。
Furthermore, the equality of people’s study and work under such circumstances should be questioned. For instance, acquiring information and knowledge never equals receiving education. In this age when young people are constantly bombarded by myriad sources of knowledge like on-line courses and electronic gadgets containing lessons by top teachers, instructing students how to learn and providing a learning environment where they could interact and collaborate with others are increasingly indispensable. Without being supervised properly, few teenagers could be self-disciplined enough to concentrate on study. For workers, lack of face to face communication is quite likely to undermine their creativity. There is mounting evidence that most brilliant ideas spring up when people pf similar fields are placed together.
此外,在这种情况下,人们的学习和工作的平等应该受到质疑。例如,获取信息和知识从来不等于接受教育。在这个时代,年轻人不断受到各种各样的知识的冲击,如在线课程和电子设备,其中包括顶级教师的课程,指导学生如何学习和提供一个可以与他人互动和合作的学习环境,这些都是越来越不可或缺的。没有适当的监督,很少有青少年能够自我约束,集中精力学习。对工人来说,缺乏面对面的交流很可能会破坏他们的创造力。越来越多的证据表明,当人们把相似的领域放在一起时,最聪明的想法就会涌现出来。
Finally, given that people are not urged to travel between home and company or school, most of them will reduce the chance of doing “voluntary exercise”--unconscious sport like jogging to bus station or riding bicycle, which will gradually raise their likelihood of suffering from health problems like obesity and high blood pressure.
最后,鉴于人们不要求之间的旅行回家,公司或学校,他们中的大多数将减少的可能性做“自愿运动”——无意识的运动喜欢慢跑汽车站或骑自行车,它会逐渐提高的可能性患有健康问题,例如肥胖和高血压。
In conclusion, some people may celebrate the comfort and efficiency brought by advanced technology, yet I tend to subscribe to the view that it bring more challenges including balance between work and life, degrade quality of study and work as well as deteriorating health. Overall, I believe it is a negative development.
总之,一些人可能会庆祝先进技术带来的舒适和效率,但我倾向于赞同这样的观点:它带来了更多的挑战,包括工作与生活之间的平衡,降低学习质量和工作,以及健康恶化。总的来说,我认为这是一个消极的发展。