托福写作—锻造地道英语句子II

  托福写作其实很容易：20分钟学会三种题型的写法。托福写作其实很难，怎样才能写出地道的英语句子？建议：平时多多练习，并通过查词典把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。下面例子可供参考：

句子：

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

19. They cannot think clearly.
改进: They cannot think straight.

20. Money can improve their living standard.
改进: Money can improve their life.