托福写作—锻造地道英语句子I

　托福写作其实很容易：20分钟学会三种题型的写法。托福写作其实很难，怎样才能写出地道的英语句子？建议：平时多多练习，并通过查词典把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。下面例子可供参考：

句子：

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.