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托福写作—锻造地道英语句子I

2008-09-24来源:
 托福写作其实很容易:20分钟学会三种题型的写法。托福写作其实很难,怎样才能写出地道的英语句子?建议:平时多多练习,并通过查词典把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。下面例子可供参考:

句子:

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.