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There are many strategic ways to keep the students actively participating in class discussions in school. I agree that one way of doing this is that teachers should encourage their students to question everything they want to know. I believe that there are many students who doesn't/DON'T speak out to/IN the class because they are shy or they are afraid of being rejected by their classmates. For these reasons, I agree that teachers must let their students voice out/DELETE OUT their opinions so that they will/CAN develop good communication skills, overcome shyness, and create a wholesome atmosphere inside the classrooom.

Communication is part of a/THE training IN SCHOOL YOU NEED TO SUCCEED to succeed in school. This makes the quality of education more pronounced and keeping up the students in focused with their lessons /KEEPS STUDENTS FOCUSED ON THEIR LESSONS IN SCHOOL/in school. By letting the students raise up /RAISE THEIR HANDS their hands and encourage/ENCOURAGING them to ask questions, this will not only benefit the students from/IN gaining knowledge on the subject matter but this also encourages good teacher-student relations. In the process of learning , teachers must /ENABLE be able the students to have active participation.

Through questioning, students can overcome their shyness. This gives them the opportunity to voice out /voice their minds. As students, we want to know every lesson teachers has/HAVE to convey about the subject. However, if we hesitate to talk in class, we are left wondering and ended/END up WITH blank MINDS when we take examinations. That is why active participation in class by encouraging the students to speak in class is one of the best learning METHODS THAT can be taught in school.

A wholesome atmosphere is one of the important things to keep up /PREVENT the lecture in class from being boring. When there is reciprocation between teachers and students, there could be a whole lot more to learn inside the classroom. As to speak,/YOU COULD SAY it's not only the teachers who has/HAVE the active role in the classroom. However, coordinating/CO-OPERATING with students by letting them speak can make the classroom alive and fun. The class IN THIS CASE is not boring and I believe students give more attention when teachers are fun and more considerate to their students.

These whole processES is/ARE an active way of learning as I mentioned earlier. I believe that students can do best in school when there is/ARE good communication skills between students and teacher, there is students' assertiveness/THE STUDENTS WILL BE ASSERTIVE and THERE WILL BE A healthy atmosphere inside the classroom.