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　　In some countries, teenager have jobs while they are still srudents. Do youthink this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons anddetails.

　　I don't think it is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they arestill students. It can interfere with their studies, it can disrupt their homelife, and it takes away part of their childhood that they can never replace.

　　Education today is very complex and difficult .In order to learn and getgood grades, a student must work very hard and concentrate, This means attendingclasses from early in the morning until late afternoon, then doing research forprojects, then going home and doing homework. It’s a busy schedule for everyone.For someone trying to hold down a job, it’s even harder. Students need all theirenergy for their studies. If they're working after class at night, they’re goingto be tired the next day. They won't be able to concentrate. This will have anegative impact on their learning, and eventually on their grades.

　　Having a job can also disrupt a teenager's home life. Families spend lessand less

　　time together. If a teenager has a job to go to after school, he won't behome for dinner.

　　He won't be home after dinner either, and may not get home until late atnight, This means he doesn't have a lot of time to spend with his family .If hedoesn't have a car, it can mean changes in his parents' schedule ,too. They haveto drive him to work and pick him up.

　　The main drawback of a teenager having a job while he's still a student isthat he's missing out on the fun of being young. He has a whole lifetime inwhich he'll have to earn a living. This is the last free time he'll have, It’sthe last chance he'll have to hang out with friends and just enjoy himself. Soonenough he'll have to worry about paying the rent and buying food.

　　Jobs bring money, but money isn't everything. A teenager with a job givesus too much. No one should spend all his time at working, and especially not ateenager.