十天搞定托福作文

　　托福写作避免生搬硬套，要把学到的句式和词组灵活运用到自己的写作当中去!这样，写作的分数自然也就提高啦!

　　增加过渡段：

　　A1 好。。。

　　A1 好，而且 A2 好。(这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充)

　　A2 好。。。

　　14 条万能理由：

　　与事物有关：效率、方便、经济、耐久、安全、空间。

　　与人有关：健康、乐趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、经验、他人。

　　理由的安排也要有逻辑顺序—首段要雕琢，要表现!

　　1、排比反问：

　　Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walkedalong the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallenleaves on the Fragrance Hill?

　　If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much funoutdoor activities could bring you.

　　2、背景知识式：

　　With the development of science and technology, more and more companies(including international companies and small companies) are founded, but thereare not enough people to

　　take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities areprovided to people who are still teenager students.

　　In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they arestill studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Othersconsider that teenagers

　　should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, Iagree with the latter.

　　Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working andthey think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a goodrelationship with others.