十天搞定托福作文

　　3、定义式：

　　Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings usein their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day byday. How does the development of technology affect our life?

　　Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development oftechnology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On theother hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructiveinfluence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, thedevelopment of technology does far more good than harm to people’shappiness.

　　正文部分每段安排：

　　1~3 行 主题句

　　4~8 行 细节论述

　　1~2 行 主题再现

　　主题句的要求：

　　1、要有概括性：

　　Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can workmore efficiently.

　　Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency inmany ways.

　　解说： TS 一定要概括， 不要写成反例那样那么细节， 不然后面的话不好展开了。

　　2、避免绝对化：

　　Eg -. Elder people are efficient.

　　Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experiencedelders can work more efficiently.

　　解说：正例表述得体，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有对比说法“compared with”等。

　　3、避免语法和用词错误。

　　细节论述部分：

　　1、个人事例推广到一般：(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)

　　During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are requiredto resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.