你写我改：商务英语名师评点网友作文(3)
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网友作文三：
To: Ms Gedad
From: Mr Fenliny
Date: 4th August, 2008
Subject: Reply to the invitation
Room 204,**Road
Minhang District
Shanghai,
China (右上方)
Thank you for your letter, Ms Gedad. We are very interested in your suggestion which[1] shown in the letter. And drama[2], I think, will be a quite good opportunity to have a further contact.
The only little problem is the date of invitation because my schedule has been full this week. Could you check your agenda and make a change if possible? I'd like to hear your satisfied answer ASAP.
Best wishes!
your sincerely,
Fenliny
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[1]Which is/was shown
[2]改成动名词要好一些。 Attending a drama
网友作文四：
Dear Goddard,
I have received the letter of Aug.7 and thank you for your letter[1] .
I'm interested in your suggestion about our date [2] on Aug.10.I'd like to accpect your invitation to have a moive with you. I think we would have a nice day.
Unfortunately,I need to meet my client on Aug.10,and I'm afraid that I have much work that week. Should we meet at 6.00 on Aug.14 afternoon. We could have dinner first if you're available.
I'd like to hear you soon.[3]
Best wishes.[4]
Fenlini
_________________________________________
[1]合成一句好不好？ Thanks for your letter on Aug.7th.
[2]这是用在单身男女约会用的，咱们好像还不知道对方是否是单身哦！ Appointment
[3]I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
[4]Sincerely yours
网友作文五：
Dear Angela，
Thank you very much for your kind invitation. I'm very interested in the suggestions you mentioned about and hope to discuss with you on the details.
I would be very pleased to enjoy your invitation for the drama. It's so kind of you.(去掉)
Unfortunately, I have a big meeting with my boss on next Monday and i am unable to meet you on that day. Next Tuesday to Friday is possilbe for me. I would be greatful if you could tell me the suitable date for you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks and Best regards[1] .
Fiona Cai
_________________________________________
[1]Sincerely yours
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To: Ms Gedad
From: Mr Fenliny
Date: 4th August, 2008
Subject: Reply to the invitation
Room 204,**Road
Minhang District
Shanghai,
China (右上方)
Thank you for your letter, Ms Gedad. We are very interested in your suggestion which[1] shown in the letter. And drama[2], I think, will be a quite good opportunity to have a further contact.
The only little problem is the date of invitation because my schedule has been full this week. Could you check your agenda and make a change if possible? I'd like to hear your satisfied answer ASAP.
Best wishes!
your sincerely,
Fenliny
_________________________________________
[1]Which is/was shown
[2]改成动名词要好一些。 Attending a drama
网友作文四：
Dear Goddard,
I have received the letter of Aug.7 and thank you for your letter[1] .
I'm interested in your suggestion about our date [2] on Aug.10.I'd like to accpect your invitation to have a moive with you. I think we would have a nice day.
Unfortunately,I need to meet my client on Aug.10,and I'm afraid that I have much work that week. Should we meet at 6.00 on Aug.14 afternoon. We could have dinner first if you're available.
I'd like to hear you soon.[3]
Best wishes.[4]
Fenlini
_________________________________________
[1]合成一句好不好？ Thanks for your letter on Aug.7th.
[2]这是用在单身男女约会用的，咱们好像还不知道对方是否是单身哦！ Appointment
[3]I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
[4]Sincerely yours
网友作文五：
Dear Angela，
Thank you very much for your kind invitation. I'm very interested in the suggestions you mentioned about and hope to discuss with you on the details.
I would be very pleased to enjoy your invitation for the drama. It's so kind of you.(去掉)
Unfortunately, I have a big meeting with my boss on next Monday and i am unable to meet you on that day. Next Tuesday to Friday is possilbe for me. I would be greatful if you could tell me the suitable date for you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks and Best regards[1] .
Fiona Cai
_________________________________________
[1]Sincerely yours
更多信息请访问：和谐英语站点 和谐英语论坛
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