我的新手机My New Cellphone

After I got full marks in my math examination, my mother brought me a new cellphone. I love my new cellphone, is a smartphone. The color of it is black. I have downloaded a lot of useful applications on it. Such as English-Chinese dictionary, google map, funny games, and so on. Some people say cell phones will have a negative influence on students. But I don’t agree with this, I think properly using cell phone, can give us lots of benefits. If we have any problem, we can turn to our smartphone for help. It’s very convenient. I will make the most use of my new cellphone. 
在我的数学考试得到满分之后，我妈妈给我买了一台新手机。我真的很喜欢我的新手机，它是台智能机。它的颜色是黑色的。我下载了很多有用的应用在里面。比如说，中英字典、谷歌地图、有趣的游戏等等。有人说字典会给学生带来负面影响，我bong不赞同这种观点。我认为合理的利用手机可以给人们带来诸多好处。如果我们遇到任何问题，可以向智能手机求助。这非常方便。我会充分利用我的新手机的。