名师点评网友BEC初级作文(2)

网友作文四：
to: All Staff
from: Susuan Wu
To creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st. Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.
Thank you for your coperation.

名师指导：
整体很干脆，但是语气比较客气，而且没有看出是公司新政策的实行啊!